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2 minute exterior
dialogue film
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EXT. A BENCH NEAR TO
THE PLACID, STAGNANT GRAND UNION CANAL, IN A MORE RUNDOWN PART OF INNER CITY WEST
LONDON. NOON ON A CLOUDY AUTUMN’S DAY.
Mid Shot from behind the
bench: A man and a woman are sitting with their backs to the camera, faces turned
apart, there is a slight breeze that licks through their suspended silence. It whispers
and catches their hair and collars.
Front shot at the same
width:
Zach
You
got that pose from a film
Closer front shot: The woman turns around,
her shoulder caressing an invisible axis. She peers at him, every inch and line
on his face.
Julie
I
wanted to be with someone else
The surrender in his pale
eyes pierces the white of her skin. He seems older now. Weighed down by bags on
his face. He looks up and around, their
horizons are bounded, there is no room for irony.
Zach
You
are about to meet the person you will love the most. More than anyone that
you’ve imagined loving until now. Even your mother and grandmother will pale in
comparison to him, (slight break in the rhythm) or her.
She looks away dismissively
Zach
(continuing)
Its
four centimeters. You can’t flush it out now, it’s not like the clot of blood
you got rid of when you were a student
She turns around
instinctively, startled by something
Julie
I’m
still a student
He looks past her, blasé,
accepting those words at their most abstract level. Looking down, sighing.
Tracing the trail of an insect with on finger, without touching the wooden surface
of the bench arm on which it walks.
Zach
(with less expression)
Yes,
a student, a student of life
She looks at him now,
deeply enquiring, fishing for focus
Julie
Everyone
I see walk past I imagine might be our child. We can’t control it. We are at
the doorway of an unknown.
Shot centered off centre,
more on him: He peers closer now
Zach
Now
you’re talking like the Julie I know
Shot lowers: He takes part
of her hand and squeezes it. She looks down guiltily, trying to blind herself
to something, some memory, trying to break or crack it. He is stroking her hand
soothingly.
Julie
I
was the same with him too. I don’t know if it’s me or you. He was always
slouched there watching TV. And I just wanted to
(She opens her mouth and
falters. Trying to catch the air, fish like)
Julie
(continued)
To
talk, to tell him, to tell the world, what we are, why we are here. Who I am.
All of it
She looks at him placidly.
A little shy of her outburst
Zach
What
better way to tell us than by giving us a child?
Julie
But
you don’t really think that the woman controls. That the secret lies in her.
That from her life spreads. It’s all a pose.
Zach
Like
your pose?
Julie
(quickly, looking down)
I
don’t know
She continues
Julie
Maybe
it’s fitting that I be so reticent in pregnancy. That I acknowledge it’s doom
as well as joy. The woman doesn’t control. She follows. She follows the burden
of her body, and the man is left to fight in spirit. She in sweat.
Zach
Which
century are you living in?
She looks down, Closer
Shot followed by Julie P.O.V. shot: her gaze follows the ripples, the dimples
in the water. She looks up at him, honestly, from inside the cover of her mood.
Julie
Maybe
I’m just scared
He looks at her again
Julie
(continuing)
You
didn’t think I could be that, did you?
He looks away, and now we
focus on his pause, his silence. He looks back. Closer shot, centered on him,
with her still in the margins of the shot: In a collection of all maturity and
sighs as if saying “Yes, I did. I knew more than you thought about you”.
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